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Letters

What

  • A format used for communication between two people.
  • There are three main types of interest to Middle School students. These are:-
    • Personal Letters;
    • Formal Letters;
    • Letters to the Editor.
       

PERONAL LETTERS

  • Usually written between friends and family.
  • Often uses colloquial language, and may include slang and idioms.
  • Can often sound like an on-going conversation between the two people. They catch up on news, report what they are planning on doing, share gossip about mutual friends and acquaintances.
  • Usually (but not always) has the sender's address and other contact details (phone number, email address) in the top right hand corner, together with the date.
  • The salutation (greeting) can be quite informal - Hi Dear Pat, Gran, or nick-name.
  • The first paragraph often gets straight into the topic being discussed, although some people write: How are you? I am well. I hope you are too.

This is quite boring and it's often better to start your letter with: Sorry I missed you when you were in town last week! Or Have to write fast because I'm going to the movies this afternoon. How are you?

  • Even personal letters (very informal writing) needs to be broken up in to paragraphs. It makes it easier for people to read. Each paragraph cane be about a different topic:
    • how you felt about a movie you saw;
    • what you did on the weekend;
    • what plans you have for the school holidays;
    • what Tom said to Marion
    • how you felt when the cat died.
  • A mistake a lot of students make is that their letters are a series of questions for the recipient (person who receives the letter) to answer. Don't do this!! Tell the person things and ask only a few questions.
  • The "signing off" can be quite informal: Love, Penny. See you soon, Brad
     

FORMAL LETTERS

  • These are written to businesses and clubs, perhaps to request sponsorship for your cricket team or to thank them for support. Sometimes, it's to complain about a product that has not worked properly.
  • Usually formal language is used, although colloquial language is acceptable. DON'T use slang!
  • Usually the sender's address and contact details are in the top right-hand corner of the page, although it is now acceptable to place them against the left margin at the top of the page.
  • The recipient's (person the letter is going to) name, title (Secretary, Manager), and address are written against the left margin, below the sender's details.
  • Sometimes there is a reference topic, which is indented across the line a little and can be underlined. For instance,
    • Kambrook Toaster M646
    • Annual General Meeting of Members
  • 1st paragraph - Be straight to the point and state WHY you are writing the letter - what is it you want or what your problem is.
  • 2nd paragraph - Provide reasons or explanations about what you are requesting/saying.
  • Last paragraph - Conclude with what you would like to see happen and by when. Also invite the person to contact you if they need more information.
  • The "signing off" is as follows:-
    • If you wrote Dear Sir/Madam at the beginning of the letter, write Yours faithfully at the end.
    • If you wrote Dear Ms Bloggs at the beginning, write Regards at the end.
    • THEN leave enough room for you to sign your name (a couple of centimetres) and PRINT your name clearly.
  • Don't forget to SIGN your letter.
     

LETTERS TO THE EDITOR

  • These are written to the Editor of a newspaper and appear on the "Letters" page in the paper.
  • They are very short (usually only 50 - 80 words long) and very structured. If you write too much, an editor will cut out the unnecessary bits.
  • These letters express an opinion and are, therefore, are an example of an exposition. They usually include emotive language to persuade people to the particular view or idea.
  • When writing a letter to the editor as an activity for school, do NOT put your address and contact details on the top of the letter.
  • Start with Dear Sir/Madam
  • 1st paragraph - Clearly state WHY you are writing the letter. I believe that all dogs should be kept in fenced yards.
  • 2nd paragraph - Provide a reason for your view, with evidence if possible. Small children are at risk of being bitten by dogs that are not safe behind a fence.
  • 3rd paragraph - Provide another reason. Dogs that are not yarded can run on the road and cause an accident.
  • 4th paragraph - Re-state your opinion, in different words. The council should ensure that all dogs are kept in their own yards.
  • The "signing off" requires your first initial and your surname on one line; with your suburb or town on the line below. Line it up with the margin.
    J.Bloggs
    SMITHVILLE

       
 

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